snorklin, after sunrise
the journal of Michael Werneburg
twenty-seven years and one million words
Pt. Douglas, 2000.06.24
We snorkeled the Great Barrier Reef today. It was good.
twenty-seven years and one million words
We snorkeled the Great Barrier Reef today. It was good.
Remove everything that has no relevance to the story. If you say in the first chapter that there is a rifle hanging on the wall, in the second or third chapter it absolutely must go off. If it's not going to be fired, it shouldn't be hanging there.
—Anton Chekhov